Originally Posted by Boris Bear
I look at CVs regularly and the main weakness in CVs is people talk about the responsibilities of their current/previous jobs rather than what they have achieved in those roles. I want an idea of what you're capable of rather than what you're supposed to do.
Couldn't have put it better myself.
Having looked at the lad's CV he was well on the way to doing that. For the record, he should get a job no bother.